So they asked ‘what does your ideal girl look like?’

4779 digital pages filled
with ramblings
about feelings

thousands of
grammar and
spelling mistakes

a broken heart
consuming itself

a final 'goodbye' that came
out of a lover’s mouth long ago
still echoing in the ears

a stadium-load of cockroaches
and rats partying
in the house

a mailbox chocking
on unpaid bills

her room a mass grave
of empty bottles
snowed with ash

no income

electricity about to
be cut off

and she’s still

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  1. Wonderful masterpiece ended!
    I can relate your poems I lost job. I did a lot of mistakes. I have a lots of bills to pay but I have nothing. I’m totally broke but I’m still writing. As of now writing makes me alive, although I am nothing.

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    1. (⁎˃ᆺ˂) “writing makes me alive” — love the sound of that!

      All other things will eventually fall into place in time, don’t worry. Just keep writing (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑

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