she had long dark metallic looking nails and black lips on a very pale face the clothes too were designed to make her look cold and dead but she was quite lovely to her new boyfriend, the mortician She was an artist, she'd told him And she'd also told him that she'd like to learn more about human anatomy for her drawings "That one!" she said on their sixth date in the morgue "I want that one! Cut his head open from forehead to nape. I need to see how the brain's kept in there." He sighed and prepared the electric saw. There wasn't much for him to complain. He'd done pretty well at 47, hooking up with this 22-year-old
human anatomy
Daydreaming as a profession 
Omg!! 😂
“He sighed and prepared the
electric saw”
… and then the last lines. 👌👌😆 Very cool poem.
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Guess he was something like:
{\__/}
(●_●)
( >💀
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🙏🙏😆😆🙌🤓👍
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This bunny rabbit is too cool! I don’t know how to create this on my IPAD.
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I think you can still copy-paste them (◉ܫ◉)
(that’s what I do)
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Oh, thank you. That’s coco puffs sweeeet.
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Where do you get your inspiration. Everything sounds so real?
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Usually from an awful amount of daydreaming :))
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I like this one a lot.
So much so, I wish I had written it.
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Aw, thanks ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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😂 what an ending! Bravo👌
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Glad you liked it (ಠ‿↼)
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Graphic to say the least -an interesting take on human relationships. Well done.
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Thank you, Tony (^‿^)
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Fantastic!
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Thank you ⊂(◉‿◉)つ
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🙂
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Omg. So intense and interesting
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(=’ ᴗ’ ) thank you
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There was a time in my life where I wanted to be a mortician or a Medical Examiner.
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Interesting work(s). Most very real and deal with consequences. (some unintended.) All seem to leave you wondering/reflecting. I just read eight poems. Anatomy? Been an EMT and also worked at a Hospital where we (maintenance) moved the corpses. Spent a year on a military honor guard burying veterans. Being close to death, and the dead will alter your perceptions. Collecting the dead in pieces or having a person die in your lap changes you. Anyone who has run a code, done CPR and had them die, has pause to reflect. (anatomical details not withstanding.) Anyone who has delivered a baby, also is changed by the experience. It isn’t dark & morbid or enlightening. It’s just life, of which death in an inseparable part.
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Well said (•̀ᴗ•́)و
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damn, what :’) Brilliant!
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Thanks
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nice work hey
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Thanks 🙂
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The poem is defines dissecting death to live life without fears even though love can go from cold to hot in odd ways that bridge the gap between youth *&* aging to the fulfillment of 47 *&* 22. The poem is sound proof, but not water resistant, yet airtight.
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Thanks
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And thank you for presenting and representing such an interesting intricate poem!
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Thats mortifying and yet funny at the same time. Great work!
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Glad you like it ⊂(◉‿◉)つ
Thanks 🙂
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I did! How’d you get that face in your comment?
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I just copy-pasted it actually :)))
I keep a list of text-based emoticons in a .txt file on my desktop.
(\____/)
( ͡ ͡° ͜ ʖ ͡ ͡°)
\╭☞ \╭☞ You know, like professionals do 🙂
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Wow! I absolutely love this and your imagination! 🖤~Kris
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Thank you! ( ∩ˇωˇ∩)♡
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That relationship is not going to last, is it?
Gwen.
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We can only guess…
┐(ﾟ ～ﾟ )┌
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