from the violet cloud above God stretched a hand and passed down to him the dagger with a blade made of frozen shit “Take this,” said God, “and pose yourself at the gates of the school. Offer to clean the students under the fingernails and toenails with it. Now go.” He woke up when the mongrel dog whose tail he grabbed and squeezed and pulled started to cry and bark and turn to bite at his hand He screamed and backed away from the poor thing and watched it run away He looked at himself Naked and smeared with soot and mud and whatnot He looked around him The landfill just outside town He fell to his knees Damn, those were some good mushrooms He stood and walked back towards the town
high commandment

Crazy as usual–love it. Just don’t ever hurt dogs in your poems–people OK but not dogs.
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Don’t worry, the dog was just scared, not harmed ( ͡° ᴥ ͡°)
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The imagery is nice… a thumbs up for letting us roll our imagination…
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Thanks (^_^)
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I am new to WordPress although I am active at twitter as a poet and promoter #dimpleverse is my poerty platform open to everyone @dimpleverse, I don’t know how to use WordPress as efficiently. Do we use # here?
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Only if you want to 🙂
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you had me all confused in the 3/4th of the poem, then one line, everything fell in place and I burst out laughing!! Awesome!
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🤩 Thanks! 🤩
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Brilliant poem.
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Thank you (˵ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°˵)
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My pleasure 😊
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Good to know what else God hands down….
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“Soot”, maybe, not “smeared with sooth”?
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Oh, right :))
Thanks!
FIxed (๑❛ᴗ❛๑)
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