he was a very old dog and he left hairs everywhere he sat yet despite all that she let him sleep in the bed besides her Only because her family said it was wrong By definition everything those people called wrong was right and vice versa So the old dog slept with her The old dog was all she had left The old dog was the only one who stood by her side that time she overdosed on sleeping pills The old dog was the only one who didn't agree with mother when she said, "Oh joy, another suicide attempt. I wish she'd succeed at something for once in life but… well, no such luck, I guess." The old dog had died four days ago but she still kept him in bed besides her
the old dog (+audio)

It was nice to put a voice to the words! Good job xx
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(☞゚ヮ゚)☞ Thank you, Michaela!
Guess it’s a good idea to trust my drunk self more often from now on 🙂
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The ‘intonations’ did it for me. In the starting I laughed out loud! But as the story progressed, they really gripped me, the pauses are also perfect, they build up the intensity. It’s great you finally decided to post audio! Would love to hear some of your old works 🙂
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Thanks, Jay. Now that I hear my voice while sober and think about it, it reminds me of some cringy creepy pasta readings :)))
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I love that 🙂
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Ha! I love them too. You’re welcome, Bogdan 🙂
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Wow….. Amazing…. Nice to hear your voice. Which isn’t like an elderly man, btw lol. I think your accent is cool 😉😊
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ʘ‿ʘ Well, it’s the voice of a drunk guy in his 20s :))) Not much better, but I’m glad I tried this approach.
Thanks 🙂
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I love what you are doing with your blog. I loved to hear your voice! You are good at this whole blogging thing (the way you introduce your reading!). Your poetry is very “yours” – i.e. original, and it has it’s own distinct personality. I have enjoyed the way it’s developing! The reading makes it even better. I admire it!!!
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Lia – where have you been? 😦
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Hi David. I’ve been growing a few days more old and crinkly offline mostly. You noticed I was gone?! Thanks for caring. Hope you are well. :))
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looking fwd to your return, Lia. I need more inspiration for my poetry!
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Aww! That was unexpected and flattering! Thank you! But WP is filled with inspiration and I have just checked out your blog again and see that all is well on your writing front. I love your longer articles!! See you soon hopefully, around blogtown. And thanks again! :))
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。^‿^。 Thanks, Lia
I guess moral of the story is -> “It’s good to tackle your projects drunk sometimes.”
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You’re welcome. :)) Oh neat! Haha. You didn’t sound drunk. But then, I used to be amazed at how coherently I could write even after a bit too much wine. :))
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(ಥ⌣ಥ)
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Yes! You found it! That’s it, that’s the face. I should use that as cover pic for the recording :)))
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here’s to getting drunk and sharing blogs!
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Perfection ᕕ(⌐■_■)ᕗ
Now spice it with some gin
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Good poem -and great to hear you reciting it -let’s have more!
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(•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑ Thanks, Tony :))
Something tells me more’ll come soon. After a couple of shots later in the day…
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The ending!!! I was literally sitting here reading this with my dog in the bed beside me lol. My reaction at the beginning of the poem: 😊. Middle of the poem: 🥺. End of the poem: 😳😆. I did NOT see that coming!
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Thanks (^_^)
Greetings to your awesome dog V●ᴥ●V
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😂 I’m also in bed with My dog Charlie by my side (who at the moment is passing gas 😵) the poem is mournful and moving, more so by you giving voice to it. 👏🏻
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I thought I’d take people’s minds away from the darkness of the poem by combining it with something to laugh about —> My voice •ᴗ•
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Your voice worked well reading this poem. You should do more. 👌🏻
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I’ll try ʘ‿ʘ
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Awww. What a great little poem
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Thank you V●ᴥ●V
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, Shashi (^_^)
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Wow! So glad to have found your page.
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Aw, thanks 😊
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Oh no this is such a sad poem. You’ve done a great recitation though. It doesn’t really sound like an old man either but yeah it’s quite deep haha. 🖤☺
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Thanks 。◕‿◕。
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Very touchy piece! At times one feels the pulse of animals more than humans!!!!!!.
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Indeed (စ ͜ စ)
Thank you!
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A beautiful piece indeed🙂🧡
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Great read! (as ever), and good to hear you too!
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Thank you, Jorge ʘ‿ʘ
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I loved this work. I recently wrote a poem on my blog and I can resonate with this wonderfully written poem. Keep up the good work Bogdan ! 🙂
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Thank you •ᴗ•
Will do my best (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑
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A lovely poem. The cat that my wife and I had loved for seventeen years died 18 months ago. He shed fur everywhere but it was heartbreaking to see him go. He often joined us in bed, and we still remember how he used to pounce on unwary toes that poked the duvet up near him. Now we mind the Japanese Spitz dog of our daughter five days a week. He sheds white fur everywhere but we miss him very much too when he isn’t with us.
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ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ
Ah, yes, few things in life are as special as pets
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I much admire your economical presentation. Nothing wasted!
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Thank you
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You did a great job! Beautiful!
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Thank you, Debbi
ʕっ•ᴥ•ʔっ❤
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What a wonderful thing to hear your voice for the first time. I feel like I know you better.
I’m drinking Hell-Cat Maggie Irish whiskey and it’s not even 8:30 in the morning. A toast to you and your bright future. “Clink.”
To an amazing poet!
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Wow, cheers and big thanks!
I’m glad to know my voice didn’t turn you away
☉ ‿ ⚆
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Not at all.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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My heart went out to the girl with her dog. Another great posem.
Gwen.
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(~‾▿‾)~ Thank you very much!
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I love dogs 🐕. They’re so cute. When I finish school this year and finish college as well, I am going to get me my own dogs 🐕.
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