It was a strange day He still remembered it years after it happened Usually when he got drunk It didn’t take much for him to get drunk Sometimes two beers were more than enough He was perhaps five or six and big sister was in her early teens She was a rebel Wore thick makeup and revealing clothes and fake piercings and argued with mom and dad about tattoos and boyfriends But on that day mom and dad weren’t home and there wasn’t much to do in those times. There was nothing interesting on TV and the internet wasn’t a thing But big sister had an idea That morning they found the cat dead in the basement. It was old enough to die. Big sister went there and retrieved it and brought it upstairs and placed it on the window sill and they watched as birds came to eat the maggots from its rotting flesh Big sister seemed to really enjoy the show and he didn’t want to upset her so he pretended he enjoyed too These days the drunker he’d get, the more vivid the memory would play in his head He had three beers now
better than any show on TV

Wow that’s really dark. Almost traumatic for such a young child. Hope everything’s alright with you?
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Yes, unlike many of my characters, I’m all right. It’s all just fantasy at the end of the day, but thanks for asking, Shruba (^_^)
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What a vicious turn of theme. Loved it!
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( ͡ ͡° ͜ ʖ ͡ ͡°)
\╭☞ \╭☞ Thanks!
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Another short, sharp gem. Have you read The Cement Garden by Ian McEwan? This would sit well alongside that book.
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Thank you, Tom 🙂
Yes, I have read “The Cement Garden” some years ago and enjoyed it.
It’s a story for my tastes ☉ ‿ ⚆
(I think I was looking for something similar to “Flowers in the Attic” by Virginia Andrews and stumbled upon it.)
I’m glad you think my stuff could go along with such a masterpiece :))
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Did you like flowers in the attic? I read that as a young child and was obsessed so had to get all the entire collection 😊…
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I was pretty young too when I read it.
I remember it was a time when I was looking for more ‘edgy’ content with battles and stuff like that, so I was hesitant to pick it up because it looked like a cheesy family drama.
But in the end it didn’t disappoint ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ
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Yeah Awesome…. 😊
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I like: It’s both lovely and disturbing.
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(°•°) Thank you!
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Excellent expression. I approve. -S.D.
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( ^ ᗜ ^ ) Thank you, S.D.
Much appreciated
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Wow ❤️… Your voice seriously makes it. Sounds much better listening to it by you then reading it myself.
Wonderfully expressed and thrilling. Another amazing little story. Thanks for sharing really loved it ❤️😊🌹
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༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つOh, glad to know somebody likes my voice. Thanks!
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😊
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So sad how much we look to older siblings who are damaged for our cues.. My sister used to ply me with alcohol, I still love her deeply but she was not a good person to be around in many ways…
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(o・_・)ノ”(ᴗ_ ᴗ。)
I’m an only child, but I understand what you mean.
Hope all is good with you today.
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Your words are so engaging. 🖤
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( ^◡^)っOh, thank you, Carter (*blushing*)
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So good! And your recitation was awesome 🙂
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(●ↀωↀ●) Aw, thanks, Jay!
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Wow. That was cray. I don’t know what I was expecting but it wasn’t that. I really liked it!
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I’m glad you did ( ^◡^)
Thank you!
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Wow. So good and raw.
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( ^◡^)っ Thank you, Christine
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Damn ! It’s really heavy & dark. But it’s really courageous of you to write something like this. Because these kind of things often happen in our society but no one likes to talk about it.
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ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ Thank you
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Pretty good
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Thanks 😁
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I invite you and your readers to submit their short dark fiction and poetry to the Chamber Magazine at thechambermagazine.com. I like the poem. Material like that will fit in well with what I have planned.
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Wow what a story again. Really that was awesome… ❤
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Thank you (′ꈍωꈍ‵)
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