It’s been a rough rainy season and rain always put father in the drinking mood He drank more in this rainy season than ever before in his life Mother’s missing teeth and broken shoulder were proof of that Surprisingly the old story about falling down the stairs held up with the doctors Well, just like he messed his wife up the rainy season messed up the roof of the house He downed what was left of a bottle of vodka and got the ladder and a few tools and went out His son held the ladder for him He always cursed plenty when he worked on something. He was cursing his wife as he hammered at the roof and said something about his son not being his and the second best thing about his fall was that the son didn’t even have to shake the ladder, as planned Father just fell on his own thanks to the vodka he drank before climbing up there The first best thing about father’s fall was that he landed on some screwdriver in his pocket and got stabbed in the kidney The pain must’ve been something to follow him all the way to the afterlife as he bled to death and cried silently The kid watched him, watched his watering eyes, and kicked dust in his face and went back inside the house They waited until it was too late and then called the emergency number
rainy season damage

gosh, such pain.
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( T⌓T) I hope their lives improve drastically after this event…
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There’s a british saying. Revenge is a dish best served cold. Last few lines reflected this perfectly.
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( ^ – ^ )
/ >Wise words
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Nice and like
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༼ つ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ༽つ Thank you
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Sweet revenge… Cool story. The trauma and pain was perfectly told and expressed. Great poem 😊❤️🌹
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( ^◡^)っ ♡ Thank you!
I love (to write about) trauma and pain ✖‿✖
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Yeah, you do it in an awesome way 😊
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Holy shit! Loved this tale.
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I’m glad to hear that 😄
BIG THANKS! (^_^)
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I can feel the pain as I read this! 🔪
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Great (^_^)
Then I’ll consider my job here done 🙂
Thank you!
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Ha haha
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
ROUGH///BUT SATISFYING IN A CRUDE SORT OF WAY!
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ヽ( ⌐■_■)ノ BIG THANKS!
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AYE-YAH!
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Well done kid, he deserved it…
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He sure did (҂◡_◡)
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Some of the best movies have themes like this… a Dutch one called Antonia’s Line comes to mind, for example. ❤︎ Always love your style.
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Thanks! That sounds like an interesting movie too
(=`ω ´=)
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wow … I could completely envision this .. and feel what he felt ..
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(o・_・)ノ”(ᴗ_ ᴗ。)
Thank you. I’m glad he’s a relatable character.
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Hello there! hope you’re having a wonderful day 😃😇
I have nominated you for ‘The Sunshine Blogger Award’.https://knowcusp.wordpress.com/
Congratulations!! 🎊 🥳
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Wow, Big Thanks! (♥ᴥ♥ʋ )~
I am indeed having a wonderful day, and hope you do too 🙂
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Your poems are really great! Wow!
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Thank you (^_^)
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Nice. ❤️ it.
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(◕ω◕ )人(◕ω◕ )
Thank you!
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The end of a wicked man.
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Yup (^‿^)
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Too good. No words to say.
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ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ Thank you very much, Shashi!
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Riveting!
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Thank you (^‿^)
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Brilliant. I love the steady narration and the development of the poem and, as
always with your work, every word is in exactly the right place.
Gwen.
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╰( ´・ω・)つ Thank you, Gwen. Very much appreciated.
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short saga right there…
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Beautiful portrayal of angst.
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Thanks (҂◡_◡)
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Brilliant!
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(∩ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )⊃━☆゚ Thank you!
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