the little girl was scared at first but now she was terrified and about to have a panic attack He kept her tight in his arms and covered her ears and told her to calm down and that everything will be all right It was 02:24 AM and the knocks in the door and all around the walls and windows still carried on And there were howls coming from outside and curses and a constant sound of nails scratching on wood “Daddy, I’m scared! I’m…” “I know, dear, I know. But you have to calm down. Remember to focus on your breathing like I told you. Deep, deep breaths, okay? Deep. In and out. I promise you, tomorrow everything’s gonna be fine. I swear.” “Is it zombies?” asked the little girl. “No, dear. It’s something else.” “What’s it called?” “An ex-girlfriend, dear.”
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Loved it sooooo much!
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Aw, thank you! ٩( ^ᴗ^ )۶
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😊❤
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An ex gf lol… Yes watch out for us crazy women 😉. Great story Bogdan, very engaging and intense. The ending wasn’t what I was expecting, I guess I was expecting zombies or something lol. Really awesome piece 😊🌹
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Thanks! (๑ ˃̵ᴗ ˂̵)و
The atmosphere and title were inspired by Richard Matheson’s “I Am Legend”
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I love it. Great post!!
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Thank you, Ray (。^‿^。)
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Caught me off guard! 😂 Great work!
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(っ◕‿◕)っ Thank you!
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Clever poem, slight echoes of Bukowski and I mean that in the best possible way, good stuff man:)
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ヽ༼ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ༽ ノ Big Thanks, Christo!
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The ending got me!😂 Love it!
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(。•̀ᴗ-)✧
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Adore the ending!
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Thank you ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
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That last line, man. It completely changed the poem. Absolutely brilliant!
I’m building a Facebook page, “Found Online,” where I can share links to poems I really enjoy for others to visit your site and explore your work. This poem is one I chose to link to. Check out the page at: https://www.facebook.com/joestoutfoundonline
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Awesome, thanks! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I am following the page 🙂
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Ha ha, that had me fooled!
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>‿‿◕
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I had no idea where your cleverly twisted mind was going with this. I cannot explain my relief when it was not something other worldly, but something straight out of real life hell. Bravo!
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Thank you ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
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Made me laugh out loud this one!!
Brilliant!! 😁😁🖤
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( ∩ˇωˇ∩)♡ Oh, thank you!
Wrote it while listening to the audiobook version of “I Am Legend” :))
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Brilliant 😁👍🖤
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Lol 💕
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Oh my. Nice twist, haha. Thank you for stopping by my blog and I look forward to following yours!
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Thanks \( ^o^ )/
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Ha haha!
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( ͡ ͡° ͜ ʖ ͡ ͡°)
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Reblogged this on Vijayagiri views.
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Nice
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(◉ ᴗ ◉) Thank you
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
INDEED-! 😀
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(〃 ̄ω ̄〃)
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NOW—THAT IS CREATIVE! (* W *)
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😂😂😂
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Your way of building up the tension was very good….
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ヾ(〃^ワ^)ノ Aw, many thanks, Don!
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Oh, the twist at the end…didn’t expect that. But it happens far too often.
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Thanks ٩( ᐛ )و
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Haha. Lol
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Haha
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This really made me laugh ha ha! Thankfully there are many sane ex-es in this crazy world. Quite imaginative and entertaining reading!
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٩( ^ᴗ^ )۶ Glad you liked it! Thank you 🙂
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hahaha, laughed my tail off.
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(´ω`)ノ゙ Glad to hear that. Thanks!
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