again she grabs a stool and places it into the corner of the room, climbs on it, assumes the lotus position and closes her eyes and covers her ears with headphones She faces the corner The voice that speaks into her headphones starts a countdown Meanwhile her father shakes his head as he watches her “You can’t be serious,” he says. “Are you meditating again to ask God to make life fair? Is that it? What happened? Was your Uber late? Internet connection slow? Heheh!” She doesn’t hear him. The voice in her headphones says, “And twist. Remember to always twist. If you only stab him it’s not enough. That’s just gonna do a little damage that can be fixed with a quick visit to the ER. You have to twist the blade. That’s when the significant damage happens. Twist as much as you can. Show no mercy. Take advantage of the fact that he will not expect this from you.”
twist the blade

I totally relate to the prose. Excellent piece.
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( ^◡^)っ Thank you!
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A beautiful prose, Mr.Dragos!(✯ᴗ✯)
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ღԵհɑղƘՏღ( ؔ✪̤ ◡ ؔ✪̤` ๑)
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Your most welcome (✿^‿^)
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The knife twists indeed, by the hand that writes the piece… here quite graphically.
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Hmm… I’m thinking about posting a few more ‘graphic’ ones 🙃
We’ll see how they end up (๑╹ᆺ╹ )
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The timing of your comment! Can I ask you something Bogdan? Why do you “like” my posts? Judging by your content, I feel like you don’t like women much… at least, maybe not women who write like I do. You don’t have to follow nor read my blog (if you do read it)… and if you hadn’t, I likely wouldn’t have found yours. Anyway, I meant no harm… whatever you believe.
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Oh no, not liking women who read/write is far, far from true.
Of course none (really not a single one) of my poems are to be taken seriously and they don’t reflect the writer’s views in any way. It’s all just entertainment.
That being said, I do have quite a lot of time on my hands lately (I have a trainee at work and they already do all the job) and I spend it (productively:)) on WordPress reading the posts of people I follow. Sure, some I only skim through, but if I open any post I also make sure to leave it a like.
Reading random posts (sometimes merely seeing the attached pictures) makes up for a great source of inspiration. I take a simple idea and then “twist” it after my style. And that’s pretty much how it works :))
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Well, I imagine your free-time usage situation is much like that of many of us, who aim to help one another on wordpress. Well it’s good to know there is no intended malice, judging by what you’ve just said, in spite of the twisting?? This kind of thing can be upsetting to sensitive readers… the watery type mainly maybe. And influential to certain readers, in an increasingly violent world. But I guess you’re intelligent enough to know that, so perhaps my saying it here is being silly. Clearly it’s a popular genre. Thanks for that explanation of process. I do appreciate your taking the time. Sincere best wishes.
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Thanks 🙂
Glad we could clear this aspect
(. ❛ ᴗ ❛. )
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Ohhh my!
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Gotta admit, twisting the blade is very effective.
You can use the technique on fruits, like watermelon for example
ᕙʕ✿✪ᴥ✪ʔᕗ
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Well, I’ve got to agree with you there!
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Oh my… so graphic! Somebody save that girl, please.
And to you, Bogdan Dragos/Writer, I bow 🙇♀️. 👏
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Oh, thank you (灬╹ω╹灬)
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The ironic humor is interesting to read.
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Thanks ^ ↀᴥↀ ^
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Times it speaks of is very much true.
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In some families, I guess ¯\_(⊙︿⊙)_/¯
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Its more about changing times , priorities , control , exposure , interactions withing family system, may be much more complex but sure needs a thought from both sides.
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Indeed, that would be the best approach ᵔ ᴥ ᵔ
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
STORY ENDING TO BE ANTICIPATED!
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Hmm, I think I know what’s gonna happen
ミ ᕕ(ᐛ) ᕗ
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YEAH—FAIRLY OBVIOUS! 😀
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◉‿◉
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YEP. 😀
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An interesting piece! Steeped in irony! But then life itself is highly ironic, isn’t it?
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Oh, you bet (๑ →‿←๑)
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I plunge my dagger and twist the blade into big fish I catch daddy – feels good…….
(Am I training a killer?…..)
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(*゚∀゚)つ=lニニフ nah, it’s all right.
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Phew forgot….fictional….entertainment
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You make the reader to feel good vibes in the beginning and when they are busy enjoying, you put a hammer over there. Hahaha.
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Like this:
█▬▬ ◟(`ﮧ´ ◟ )
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Fantastic write!
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Thank you ( ͡^ ͜ʖ ͡^ )
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Oh my God!! That was completely a dark twist in all sense!
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Thank you! (๑•‿•)
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The blade is twisted
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It sure is
੧| ⊗ ▾ ⊗ |⊃¤=(————-
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well maybe untwist it. lol
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Twisting back will only deal more damage
(✖╭╮✖)
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One is stuck is stuck huh
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That’s right 🙂
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have a blessed one
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Wow! I had to read this twice! It actually scares me how well I pictured every word you wrote!
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Thanks (′ꈍωꈍ‵)
Glad to know I’ve produced such effects :))
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Very clever. I like this one.
Art
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(☞゚ヮ゚)☞ Thank you!
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Can I ask a question? Something really stood out to me while reading this beautifully written prose. Is the woman trying to have a child?
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(/◕ヮ◕)/ Thank you!
And no, the woman is not trying to have a child. I think she is just beyond fed up with her father who would not take the problems of her generation seriously and instead mocks them with every occasion.
That’s kinda what the poem is about. An exaggerated look at the eternal conflict between generations 🙂
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WOW…u r a brilliant story teller👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽❤
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Aw, thank you d(๑•́ω•̀)b
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That is twisted 😊👍
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Just like the blade ღ(◔ ڼ◔ღ)ミ
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What a twist…
I worry that some people will act out such things.
Having said that, I’ve written a book called I Believed in Sorry a memoir of a domestic abuse relationship to raise awareness. ✋ I’ve not intentionally spoken about violent occurrences and verbal abuse for others to implicate but that doesn’t stop them from doing so.
Following and please follow back
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She is engaging in a different type of meditation!
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That’s right ↶( *`ω´ )Ψ
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Wow, your poetry is always a cool surprise with a twist!! I love it, very entertaining!!
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Thanks! 🙂
I love twists in writing (๑*◡*๑)
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Very ironic, so graphic! Interesting to read. Nice piece Dragos
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Hey, big thanks! ଘ(๑˃ᴗ˂)
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Damn that’s cold. I like the contast of the peaceful outward appearance to the dark inner thoughts
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Thank you! ヽ(´▽`)/
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Bogdan, I really enjoyed the unexpected twist in this piece. It is consistent with the fresh way you write. Keep up the great work. Thanks for dropping by my blog. Job
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Thank you, Job!
Very much appreciated ヽ(•‿•)ノ
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Cool (^o^)/
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Thanks! ˁ(OᴥO)ˀ
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Incredible narrative, we are waiting for the sequel
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I think we can all guess what will happen…
(X_X) ☜ (◉▂◉ )
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Very creative.
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Thank you! \( ^o^ )/
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