
the room was cold and there were gray flowers of dampness blooming all over the walls He took off his shoes and the shoes were the warmest things in the room so the kitten climbed into one of them He sat on the mattress in the corner and petted the cat in the shoe He smiled and said to the kitten, "At least I have no debts." Even God agreed with him. He winked through the hole in the ceiling
You portrait it brilliantly!
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Oh, thank you very much!
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Well-penned!
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Thank you!
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Wait… let me go read it again.
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⋆(*´◡`) Ok, no hurry
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My favorite line is “Even God agreed with him. He winked through the hole in the ceiling”. Excellent work!
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Thank you (• ‿ •)
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I’ve missed this! awesome piece DR!
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Aw, big thanks, Jay
(人゚∀゚ )
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I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!!
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Very glad to hear that, Jonathan
ヘ(= ̄∇ ̄)ノ Thank you!
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I AM PARTIAL TO KITTENS! ❤
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◎ヽ(^・ω・^=)~
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MEW…
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Loves a 🐱
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True (─‿‿─)♡
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Beautifully expressed
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Thank you! ヽ( ᐖゞ)
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Hard and soft. A great juxtaposition. So subtly brilliant.
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( ^◡^)っ Thank you!
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Something soft and something hard. A great juxtaposition. Subtly brilliant.
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(◕‿◕) Thank you!
This is an older poem I’ve written. From a phase or wholesomeness rather than nihilism. I’m glad I can still reach that zone from time to time.
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cuteness! 💖
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( ๑>ᴗ<๑ )
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A man who understands how to be content. 🙂
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Feels like he represents an endangered species in today’s world :))
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Phenomenal
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Why, thank you! ლ(╹◡╹ლ)
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Lovely poem.
Gwen.
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Thank you!
╏ ˵ ✪ ﹏ ✪ ˵ ╏
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Short, sweet, and beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for reading, Ben
(๑ →‿←๑)
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Hey! I have published my first blog! Kindly check it out
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I really like it. It felt sad but hopeful at the same time,somehow. I really enjoyed it.
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And I’m glad to hear that, Kate. Thank you!
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