at least the clouds are smiling back they have faces and souls and they stare back from their blue canvas, down on his dirty, snot-smeared face It’s a warm sunny day but the bottom of the shallow, dry well is cold and full of critters Well, no problem. The sky is so pretty with all its smiling faces that he won’t even cry. He’ll stay there and look up. Still waiting for mother to return and pick him up Still waiting Smiling back at the clouds Still waiting
smiling back at the clouds

Very interesting…..I liked the first two lines
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The poem would be so much more wholesome if they were the only lines
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Clouds smiling down at you?….now that’s imagination I like to see…..
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꒰´꒳`∗꒱ ♫꒰・◡・๑ ꒱
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Very artistic….they’re even singing…..
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Wow!! So well written!
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(っ◕‿◕)っ Thank you!
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Thank you for yet another good piece of writing.
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I thank you for reading ( o˘◡˘o)
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A but scary but excellent!
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Thanks!
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If my interpretation is correct, this is one heavy, dark piece. Good work.
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Your interpretation is highly appreciated, my friend.
Thank you ✧( ु•⌄• )◞
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
AND WAITING—!
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This is hauntingly beautiful
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Thank you! ★~(>﹏◕✿)
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Very interesting!
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( /ω\*) Thanks!
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You are welcome
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Nice
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Thanks
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Oh my goodness! What an amazing poem. I love the fact that it is mainly focused on the sky as an example of nature. The sky is also one of my favourite natural things to ever exist on this Earth. It smiles indeed.🙂😍
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Yep, when nothing and no one smiles back at you the sky still does
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I thought the same! I love the sky as well as its the one piece of the natural world that is always attainable to us from our window ❤ Its so easy to feel connected to the world by looking at it.
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Yeah, we can live on different patches of land separated by water, but when we look up we all see the same sky
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I totally agree with you on that one. “It’s so easy to feel connected to the world by looking at the sky.”💯
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((ε(*´・ω・)っ†*゚¨゚゚・*:..☆
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Well written, good job
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Thank you! (*´▽`*)
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Visit nice
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Nice
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Beautiful poetry
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Thank you, Anand ( ˘ ͜ʖ ˘)
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