“I was ten years old,” she said, her head resting on my shoulder. “And the flames covered the damn sky. Though our neighbor was actually lucky. Lucky I didn’t burn his house. I mean, motherfucker had it coming. You don’t run over a girl’s puppy and expect to get out scratch free, you know?” “I too had a neighbor who ran over my puppy with his tractor,” I said. “I think I was also around ten.” “And what did you do about it?” she asked “Nothing,” I said “What? But how?” “Like I said, I was just some insignificant kid from the countryside. All I could do was cry.” “My God,” she said, “that’s so fucking lame. Where’s that neighbor of yours today?” “I’ve no idea. Perhaps he’s dead. He was pretty old when it all happened.” “If that’s the case then you have the duty to go piss on his grave. At least.” “Um… I wouldn’t know where that is. And besides, I learned to forgive.” “That’s what the weak say. What kind of man are you?” “One who doesn’t hold grudges?” She sighed. “We gotta spend more time together.” “And learn from one another?” I asked She didn’t reply
we gotta spend more time together

Forgiving is a courageous act. I would say the guy is cool.
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Oh, thank you (๑*ᗜ*)
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Welcome 🙂
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brilliant! I love it! I love the juxtapositions of attitude; and the ease with which you tell the story through dialogue; great opening 🙂
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Very glad to hear that, John!
Thank you ( ⚈ワ⚈)
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The end is a twist again, who is going to learn from who? well done
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Thanks!
And to be honest, I don’t think there’s gonna be much learning there…
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Great! the more you write the more you learn about writing.
It’s brilliant mate. it is ambiguous, perfect!
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That sounds just great!
Thanks (˶′◡‵˶)
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Reblogged this on Love and Love Alone.
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✨A.M.A.Z.I.N.G✨
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(っゝωᗜ)っ Thanks!
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😎
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Written so well….
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Glad you liked it, Don ٩( *´╰╯`)۶
Thanks!
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Your usual quality standard…..
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٩( ᐖ )人( ᐛ ) و
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No time for grudges
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Agreed ( ˘ ͜ʖ ˘)
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Absolutely love this! Yes, spend more time together,
Gwen.
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Lovely idea, Gwen!
But it’s… too late now (っ˘̩ ╭╮˘̩)っ
Big thanks anyway!
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Reading this made me feel as I was there at that time.
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Glad to know I’ve achieved that, Mishra
Thanks (゚▽゚*)
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uh he should probs stay away from her lol 🙂
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That’s how it turned out in the end
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They’re very away from each other now…
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interesting! 😏
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ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ
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also, what is that little face? haha cant quite figure it out
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Oh, it’s a winking face :))
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; )) thats how i do a winky face lol but whatevs!! ☺️
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I tried to make it more complex :))
( >ω●)
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aha!! i like that >.< haha my best attempt im done now lol
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Nice one
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Thanks!
(๑→‿←๑)
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Great
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(>^_^)> Thank you! <(^o^<)
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Forgiveness is an attribute of the Strong – Ghandhi.
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Very well said ٩( ^ᴗ^ )۶
Thank you!
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I appreciate how “And learn from one another?” is a question, in an uncertain tone but still pointed.
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Thanks, it’s great to know someone DOES appreciate that question
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Beautiful poetry
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Thanks! (๑>◡<๑)
And thank you for checking it out 🙂
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So much wisdom in these short few words. We can be blinded by our own perceptions. Thank you for sharing this piece of writing. 😊
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Thank you for checking them out!
Much appreciated!
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