
he spent four weeks away from his family in a rented apartment somewhere on the outskirts of town he told them that he needed this he was a writer needed to focus on his work conducting his research undistracted his little girl would call from time to time asking daddy to hold his phone against his forehead while she made a kissing sound on the other line very wholesome except he lied about holding the phone against his forehead “How can you be such a monster?” asked the naked prostitute sitting on the edge of his bed “Shut up,” he said tossed his phone on the desk and unbuckled
Some clever subtle messages going on here…
asking daddy to hold his
phone against his forehead
while she made a kissing sound
on the other line
was clever and delightful
When I came to the end it all fell into place. People can live two lives And sleep happily at at night.
A dark theme but sadly real in many instances. You did a good job presenting this side of life…..
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Thanks you!
It’s as you said, “sadly real in many instances.”
The darkness of the human heart is beautiful to see in fiction. But it’s very important to remain there. It’s just like going to the zoo. The savage animals are beautiful to look at, but you surely wouldn’t want to be in their enclosure, or for them to get out.
^(`ω´ )^ψ
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The darkness of the human heart is beautiful to see in fiction
That is good….. you excel in doing this
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Thank you (๑꒡ᆽ꒡๑)
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great
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Thanks! (^_^)
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A good one 🙃
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Thank you! (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
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Your most welcome🙏
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You are the king of cruelty. It shines in this piece of writing. How conniving and deceitful can some people be. It’s really a question mark on human nature. Nothing human about it. Nice writing. 🙂
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I’ll humbly accept that title :)))
Thanks! ↶( *`ω´ )Ψ
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Unfortunate is the only word that came to my mind after reading this. The theme is dark and mood is subtle. Good work mate 🙂
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Unfortunate indeed.
Thank you for checking it out
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Ahh. Brutal. Dark. Yet so amazing.
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Thank you! (○゚ω゚)
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Wonderful story telling with a bold theme! What a harsh reality…. 😅😃
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Yeah, it’s sad to think that there are children out there who actually live it
(╥_╥)
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Well, you did a good job advocating for them🙏👍
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Glad to know that. Thanks!
ε(*・ω・)_(・ω・*)з
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People (we) do stuff like this all the time. None of us truly knows anyone else…we’re lucky if we know ourself.
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This is so well said 🙂
Thank you! ʕ·ᴥ·ʔ
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It was my pleasure (pain?) reading. You do dark so well. 🖤
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Human nature can be dark and cruel, more so in some than others.
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Oh, definitely! In a perfect world, all evil stays in fantasy. To be looked at and used as a bad example…
But we don’t live in a perfect world, do we?
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Very well said 👏
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ʕっ•ᴥ•ʔっ Thank you!
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dark and witty!
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Thank you!
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Haha like the face
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Nice
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Thanks! ( o˘◡˘o)
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Your welcome
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Would you be interested in writing content on our blog?
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sad yet tasty 🙃
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(ˆ ڡ ˆ)yum!
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Hi, I am accepting author interviews and book promotions ✍️🔖
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It’s sad that there are people like these. Excellent writing though!
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( つ´∀`)つ Thank you!
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Thanks
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Wonderful twist in the plot
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Thank you, Rose!
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