
always cold in the north perhaps coming here was a mistake after all It's not so much the weather as it is the ever gray sky It favors depression Lack of sunlight lack of vitamin D He walked his dog around the block and counted zero smiles out of sixty-three faces seen and passed by The block was no fun so he followed the dog into the back alleys. It picked up on some smell and the smell grew potent enough that even he was beginning to feel it Not pleasant He expected a dumpster But found two dumpsters and a homeless old man huddled between them Ragged to threads holding a dead raccoon on his lap eating from its flesh raw and bloody Aw shit, he whispered. Maybe this place ain't so bad after all
This is dark and unusual. Warning to raccoons – Leave quietly. The humans have blown some fuses. Have they none to spare now?
You’re great at twists. 🙂
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Thanks! ʕ ◉ᴥ◉ ʔ
You know, when I read a twisted story (or watch a movie) I always like to believe that the madness is actually not out there in the world but rather it’s all in the mind of the character who interacts with the world (it even makes a lot more sense like that).
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You’ve said this before. Madness in fiction is beautiful. wheras madness in reality is shocking
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(☞゚ヮ゚)☞ Exactly!
The most important thing is to never have madness cross from fiction to reality (the other way around is okay though).
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That is exactly what it is. The madness within is the key to such unique characters and twisted stories. You have it all figured out. Shows in your writing. Great! 🙂
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Oh, thank you! (๑ゝڡ◕๑)
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That was a surprise toward the end, as I certainly didn’t expect the raccoon of the title to show up like that. And you gave us readers another twist right after that when the narrator has a positive reaction. Then your reply to the other comment makes me wonder if the narrator imagined the scene. That adds even another layer of interesting-ness.
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Thank you, Dave ( o˘◡˘o)
I like to keep it from twist to twist if I can :))
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Yikes 😱 Dark 😱 a twister for sure. Good one.
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( ^◡^)っ Thank you!
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Wow, what an image with dumpster and racoon and a homeless. It is haunting.
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Sometimes life is truer than fiction, that’s what scary.
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(◍•﹏•) In most cases though, life is quite boring, and people come up with mad fiction to make it less so :))
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Very entertaining brother, good fun and well delivered, take care
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Thanks!
You too (´°‿°` )
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Wow. Visceral ending there.
I can’t help thinking that if he had smiled at those sixty-three people, he’d have received some in return. Sometimes, we make our own moods.
Love this poem.
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Thank you! (◕‿◕)
It’s very true that he would’ve received a smile back if he showed it first, but most people don’t think that way, I’m afraid :))
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I am gagging! Nothing worse than rotten raccoon breath.
Your description of the entire walk is really good.
“Counted zero smiles” I like this observation (stated so clean and matter of fact that Hemingway would be jealous). It captured the “favors depression” perfectly and simply.
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Thank you (๑ →ܫ←)
I guess some people aren’t really looking for company or happy things to pull themselves out of depression.
Sometimes witnessing something crazy or weird enough to break the day to day monotony is more than enough :))
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I’ve human beings eating another human’s flesh. It’s the dark side of the mind that I’ve only started to comprehend. Your poem is unusual and provoking. Loved it!
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*I’ve seen human beings*
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Many thanks for checking it out!
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You’re welcome.
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