It became more and more
obvious
There was a storm inside her
growing ever stronger
and she sought
to terminate it
before it was too late
It's arguably more difficult to
terminate such storms
when you're fifteen
and still living with your parents
so she decided not to
share her struggle
with them
and reached inside her
for the eye of the storm
with a steel wire she'd kept in
a bottle of hand sanitizer for a day
and a night
Yes, the first raindrops painted the
white of the bathtub
they were crimson
and salty
like her tears
Definitely safer when it’s done legally, discreetly and by compassionate health care workers… hopefully this muse survives without too much permanent/horrific internal damage. Youngteen can be a challenging age… young women are often taught to be alluring but not necessarily how to prevent pregnancy nor how to be responsible teenage parents (nor how to bear the brunt of stigma if they happen to allure anybody successfully – nor how to be wise/discerning in the type of future co-parent they be alluring, nor the method by which they attempt to abort, when abortion is not a legal option). Often told one thing, but shown another, in society…
Poignant write. The crafting of it, and the image with it is beautiful…
Dealing with pain is so difficult. The heart wants to cry and the mind struggles to find an outlet. Self-harm is a silent cry for help. I wish it didn’t have to reach this stage. But sometimes, nothing really helps. Unfortunate.
Well written. Emotional…
Heartwrenching!
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Thanks! ◉‿◉
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Amazing write ❤
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Oh, thank you! ٩( ^ᴗ^ )۶
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You’re welcome 😉
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Eyes of the storm in her young heart
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、ヽ`、ヽ`个o(・_・。)`ヽ、`ヽ
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So beautiful
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(.づ◡﹏◡)づ. Thank you, Rakel!
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Hot damn! My dude. Good stuff.
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Thanks! ☆゚°.* ᕕ( ⌐■_■ )ᕗ
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You craft the story of this poem so well. Such visceral images. 💙🙏❤
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(˵╹⌣╹˵) Thank you!
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Definitely safer when it’s done legally, discreetly and by compassionate health care workers… hopefully this muse survives without too much permanent/horrific internal damage. Youngteen can be a challenging age… young women are often taught to be alluring but not necessarily how to prevent pregnancy nor how to be responsible teenage parents (nor how to bear the brunt of stigma if they happen to allure anybody successfully – nor how to be wise/discerning in the type of future co-parent they be alluring, nor the method by which they attempt to abort, when abortion is not a legal option). Often told one thing, but shown another, in society…
Poignant write. The crafting of it, and the image with it is beautiful…
“Making something illegal doesn’t make it disappear.” – https://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/2012/08/consider-the-coat-hanger/261413/ (found during quick search for ‘abortion methods wire”
It’s even remaining/re-becoming an issue in some parts of North America: https://www.npr.org/2019/09/19/759761114/with-abortion-restrictions-on-the-rise-some-women-induce-their-own (found during quick search for “safe alegal/illegal abortion methods”)
Thanks for elevating the feed… You’re wonderful, Bogdan… :)) 🤓🌹🕊
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ヽ(•‿•)ノ Wise words, Lia!
Thanks for the very educational comment.
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The last few lines were filled with brilliant imagery, fantastic work
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Thank you! (ˆ‿ˆ๑)
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Wow, this is so eye-opening. The delivery was top notch.
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٩( ๑╹ ꇴ╹)۶ Thank you!
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Wow, great story! Thank you
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ʕっ• ᴥ • ʔっ Thanks!
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awesome title and very relevant!!
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Thank you! (・◡・)
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Dealing with pain is so difficult. The heart wants to cry and the mind struggles to find an outlet. Self-harm is a silent cry for help. I wish it didn’t have to reach this stage. But sometimes, nothing really helps. Unfortunate.
Well written. Emotional…
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Indeed, self-harm is a silent cry for help. We never see someone self-harming. We only see the scars.
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I appreciate the effort and sweat put into this piece. Still, it feels tragic.
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Thank you for checking it out, Nancy (´,,•ω•,,)
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Nice post
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Thanks! (^_^)
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❤
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