the other night she went to sleep listening to subliminal audios and woke up in the morning saying, “I am birds. Many, many birds trapped together in a bag of silk. This thing that the world looks at and calls my body is but a bag of silk that traps birds inside. I am not the bag. A bag isn’t alive. I am the birds inside the bag. And I must get out!” She ran into the bathroom Her father shrugged. “Fuckin’ shit,” he said, shaking his head. “To think that she could’ve been a doctor, or a lawyer, or an engineer. She could’ve been anything. But she chose to study creative writing in college. Now she’s a poetess... and we are no more than characters lost in her verses.”
I am birds

Brilliant.
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(つ°ヮ°)つ Thanks!
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Haha, someone said, don’t date a poet.
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They… were probably right ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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OHO, wait! That mind of the father needs some improvement, you know! Shocks me!
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Yeah, creative people receive the least support from their peers… (๑*ᗜ*)
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Yeah… But not always! I am getting the support, one could ever get! For every thing I want to do as a career! Or just a hobby!
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( ^◡^)っ Woah, you’re one of the few lucky ones!!
#BLESSED :))
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And I am grateful I am🙏
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Hot damn! My dude. The Bard of Avon is clapping his hands and the form an verse of the song language given it’s due again. A fuckin herald of being a bird in this fucking era gone to the doggs. Give this man a beer.
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( ^_^)o自自o(^_^ )
Cheers!
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Why can’t she do that?! It is alright if you are lost in her verses, at least you are there! She puts you there because she cares about you man!
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ヽ༼ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ༽ ノ Yeah, but what if her verses are anything but wholesome? They might be dark and gritty and disturbing enough to put the songs of devils to shame :))
Trust me, you don’t wanna be in such verses :))
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Oooooooooo…. Never thought so! Trust you, I don’t wanna be in such verses…
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You cooking it my dude.
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{\__/}
(●_●)
( > 🍳 🔥
Thanks! Hope it’ll taste all right :))
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Oh it’s cooking well. You had that shit coming out the oven done. Not seasoning needed.
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I am soo… Suprised! But have to say.
great…
I think you must be used hearing this because your creations are always amazing!
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Oh, it’s infinitely appreciated, believe me!!
I do dream about the day when compliments will sound louder than the booming voice of my inner critic (he’s such an asshole! Never pleased with anything…)
/ (˃ᆺ˂)\
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I see…. Well good day!
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Thank you! And thanks for stopping by to read the poem ( o˘◡˘o)
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Your poems deserve more than just a read… Alot more..
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Aw, thank you! (≚ ᴗ≚)
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😊🙏
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😂
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(๑>ω<๑)
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Sounds like she made the right move. Pardon the pun.
Geese here in Canada are going south. A goose probably won’t fit in a bag.
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Hmm… Depends on the size of the bag, I’d say
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Anyway, thanks for checking it out! 🙂
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Ha ha !!!
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(◍≧ω≦◍)
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Shared the link with my friend who’s daughter is studying creative arts.
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Oh, thanks! ( •◡•)
I hope your friend finds this useful (in an entertaining way).
ʘ‿ʘ
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I love this!
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Aw, thank you so much! (°◡°♡) .:。
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Intriguing.
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Thanks!
・:*+.\(( °ω° ))/.:+
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I’m intrigued. I think she should be a character you keep.
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Good idea!
Thanks for checking it out!
( ๑✧∀✧๑ )
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The beauty it brings to be subjective
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( ◕◡◕)っ Thank you!
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The usual reaction – Oh, you write? But what’s your real job?
So painful and hilarious!
Great message and story, Bogdan. 🙂
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(☞゚∀゚)☞ Thank you!
Hah, imagine meeting the parents/family of your significant other and when they ask what you do for a living you say, “Well, I write…”
Of course they’ll either think you’re making millions or dying of hunger in the streets. Seems like there’s no middle way for this profession. When people hear about it, they only visualize it in the two extremes :))
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Haha! Exactly. 🙂
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Epic🖤🖤
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(/•-•)/ Thank you!
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No need dear
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Ots also kind of funny. Keep going
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(´ω`)ノ゙ Will try my best! It’s a promise :))
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sure
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Can you give me your opinions on my writing
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Me, I’m no critic when it comes to writing, so all I can say to another writer is “Good Job” and “Write On!”
So I’ll do just that (・◡・)
Followed.
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okay
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Omg! Takes my heart.
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(・ワ・)ノ♡
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😀😄very very good
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Thank you! ◝(^ᗜ^)◜
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That’s entertaining, Sorry for not stopping by your blog earlier, it’s wonderful💐
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Oh, thank you! ٩( ^ᴗ^ )۶
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You mean there is more than one bird inside this bag? No wonder I am so conflicted! Thanks for the poem. Love it!
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-=≡Σ(((⊃゚∀゚)つ Thanks for checking it out, Darren!
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Haha, so good 😆
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Thank you! \(•ᴗ•)/
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Hilarious, tragic and lovely. ❤️🔥🔥🔥❤️
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(๑*ᗜ*) Thanks!
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I love that you tell a story with everything you write
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I try… ٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و
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Nice…
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She should have been an engineer or a doctor. Lol!😂
She’s just fine to me
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I think the same (✩꒳✩)
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Great
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Nicely penned, poetess!
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Thanks for sharing the quite enjoyable poetry by the “poetress.” 🙂
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I thank you for checking it out (◕‿◕)
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Reblogged this on How I found My Muchness and commented:
Poetess 🥰
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Thank you for the birds🥰
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Thanks for checking ’em out!
ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
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Giggle Giggle🐦❤️
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🦅😍🥳
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I love this
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Oh, thank you! (◍•ᴗ•◍)
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Dear Bogdan, A mesmeric poem
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Reblogged this on Pdlyons's Explorations and commented:
bags of silk
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(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
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it was my pleasure to read it. thank you!
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Tragically beautiful.
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ʕっ• ᴥ • ʔっ Thank you!
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