"When you no longer
see the shadow of what
kept you strong
it's time to let go."
Those would be the last words
he wrote
at the back of the notebook
he filled with thoughts
and rants
and poems
‘Thoughts That Come From
The Heart’
was the title
and the work will remain
for long after he'd
pass away
At least that was the plan
But alas,
as he gave his final breath the
cigarette rolled from his fingers
to the desk and all the way
down on the shaggy carpet
It was a matter of minutes
until the
whole room became
a snapshot from the inferno
It's almost like the gods
want to send
a message. They want to
say that poets
rarely
if ever
have happy endings
I'm starting to
believe that
more and
more as
the days pass
When you no longer see the shadow of what kept you strong, it’s time to let go.
This line has fascinating depth to it and I had to read it again and again.
Brilliant work 💯
(っಠ‿ಠ )っ Yeah, usually what the artist thinks is something like, “In a thousand years my bones will turn to dust, but my name will live on!” (or something along these lines), but alas, there are plenty of cases when it’s just not so…
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Is that an intentional reference to Dante? Virgil, Homer, and the other great poets got to spend eternity just outside the gates of the inferno. BTW, great poem. I enjoy your writing.
When you no longer see the shadow of what kept you strong, it’s time to let go.
This line has fascinating depth to it and I had to read it again and again.
Brilliant work 💯
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Thanks for checking it out, Saliha!
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A happy ending indeed. The poet and his work died together. Now, neither will languish without the other. A sad reality.
Great work! 🙂
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(っಠ‿ಠ )っ Yeah, usually what the artist thinks is something like, “In a thousand years my bones will turn to dust, but my name will live on!” (or something along these lines), but alas, there are plenty of cases when it’s just not so…
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Beautiful piece of work. Indeed. It’s the bitter reality of life.
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( ◕ᴗ◕)っ Oh, many thanks for checking it out!
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mine pleasure. Have a great day
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I agreed
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Thanks! (◐‿◑)
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🙂
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The artist experiences too much to be happy. 🙂
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Ture… (╥_╥)
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Is that an intentional reference to Dante? Virgil, Homer, and the other great poets got to spend eternity just outside the gates of the inferno. BTW, great poem. I enjoy your writing.
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Nope, not an intentional reference to Dante, or anyone else :))
(つ▀_▀)つ But I definitely like that point of view
Many thanks for checking it out!
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Well, it works. Whether you meant it or not, it makes the poem stronger rooting it in the common literary culture.
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I love how different your poetry is
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Oh, thanks for checking it out! (๑>◡<๑)
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Beautifully written… poets rarely get a happy ending!! Quite true.. 😌
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