it wasn’t morning yet
but he woke up
to the sounds of cheering
and applause
He looked around
and saw
shadowy figures with
elongated faces
and bright, white eyes
staring at him
“Congratulations, they said. You
have awakened.”
“What in the hell?” he
said, looking around
startled. “Who are you?”
“The messengers,” replied
the shadows. “We are very pleased
to announce that you
may collect your prize
whenever you are ready. You’ve
earned it.”
“What? What did
I do?”
“You awakened. In a world of
sleepers
you woke up
and are therefore eligible for
ascension. You might follow
us through the hole
in the ceiling whenever you
are ready. All that’s left
to do here is
to melt the shackle.”
“What?” he said
Then one of the shadows
gave him a small
bottle that smelled strongly
of gasoline
and a box of matches
The other shadows
pointed to
his desk, to all the papers
stacked on it
and under it
and all around it
“Those are my poems,” he said
“Indeed. They represent
everything that keeps you
tied to this world. Your shackle.
Burn your shackle and melt it
away so you can ascend
and take flight. The time
has come.”
“I worked all my life
to write those
poems,” he said
“Yes, you did. But now that you
are awake you see that
they’re all in vain. For
nothing is real
on this plane. It’s all
a dream, of course. You have
designed it pretty nice. A simple
dream spent entirely in
the confines of a narrow room
with low ceiling. Drinking
and smoking and
writing all day long
and late into the night. It’s
a beautiful dream. No family,
no friends, no communication with the
outside world, and no desire
for any. You’ve thus taken
a shortcut to awakening, but it’s by
no means illegal. You’re still
eligible for ascension. So,
whenever you’re ready, we are.”
He watched the shadows
The shadows watched him
He reached out for the
gasoline and matches, looked over
to the desk and the stacks
of paper
Looked for a long
time
Closed his eyes
and went back to sleep
The shadows were gone
by the morning
but they left the gasoline and
matches
behind
He got out of bed
went to the desk
by the window
opened the blinds
and started writing
another poem
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(^0^) So true, indeed! ;)))
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The shadows are always calling in this profession…
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Absolutely brilliant Bogdan, a work of dreamlike genius on the vain life of a writer! 😁😁👏👏❤️❤️
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Thank you! (′ꈍωꈍ‵)
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For me, the voice of the shadows is the voice of the Mysterons in the TV sci-fi Joe 90.
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Had to look that up :)) (◕‿◕)
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Amazing, a bit different from your other poems but equally good!
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Thank you, Jay! =✪ ᆺ ✪=
Guess I tried something more ‘meta’ here :))
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This was written so vividly! I think I’d make the same choice.. 🙂
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༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ Me too :))
Thanks for checking it out!
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Hello
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Unique one dear, with purity of truth.
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Thank you! ╮ (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.) ╭
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Mine pleasure.
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A mysterious scenario, and I like that we’re left to wonder what would’ve happened if the character had risen with the messengers. He made a good choice to continue with his poems.
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Hmm… I guess he would’ve ascended to a dimension where the consciousness understands that nothing in existence has any meaning save the one you give it. Therefore poetry and the very act of creation would’ve been just as meaningful as doing nothing.
༼ ºل͟º ༽
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So glad the narrator decided to keep on writing and not take the ‘hole in the ceiling’ option. Definitely the right thing to do.
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I like to believe so too (´∩。• ᵕ •。∩`)
Thanks!
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Hi
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Hi you too.
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OOOO! How lovely! I was worried how it would end… I feel better now. LoL. Thank you for this.
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(っ◕‿◕)っ Glad you found the ending you expected in it!
Many thanks for checking it out! 🙂
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If because of any reason, I stop writing poems, and my writer dies ( God pls don’t do this to me! ) This is the one thing, that will keep her alive.
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c⌒っ╹v╹ )っ Ah yes, always do all that’s in your power to keep the writer in you alive!
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Sure will!
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Made my day, after being sad, that tommorow is my birthday, in lockdown, again! ( I am fed up of all this civic and stuff!) ಠ_ʖಠ
Good writing, btw
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ヽ(≧ω≦) {☆HAPPY★BIRTHDAY☆}(≧ω≦)/
♪o~( ´∀`)っ┌iii┐
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Thanks! That made me feel better, a little
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ascension is fake. he made the right choice.
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Oh, glad to know ╰(´꒳`)╯
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At once surreal and present writing … a wow!
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A big THANK YOU from me ヽ(•‿•)ノ
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Was there ever a choice for him, really? 😉😁💙
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Hmm… Good question. Honestly, I’m not very sure…
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° )
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Lovely poem
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Thank you! ◉‿◉
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Nice!
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Thanks! ( ˘ ͜ʖ ˘)
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I do believe he has chosen well. Never trust an entity that tells you to burn your poems.♥
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Oh, very well said, Nina. Very well said!
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And big thanks for checking it out!
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So glad he didn’t give up.
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That’s a real writer ԅ(≖◡≖ԅ)
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Wow
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Intriguing and thought-provoking. Well done!
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Many thanks for checking it out, Colin
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Yes, I agree. Don’t trust an entity that tells you to burn your favorite stuff. I liked this one.
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(*゚∀゚)つ Thanks!
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A unique point of view 😜
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(^∀^) Thanks!
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Oh my this is so great
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Thank you! ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ
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I love your metaphor for the shadows
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( ^◡^)っ Thank you!
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Nothing can stop a writer
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Absolutely! (•̤̀ᗜ•̤́๑)
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❤
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In one word…Amazing.
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╰(´꒳`)╯Thank you!
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This is great! 😂 A simple dream and a worthy one. Thing is, you could have burned them cause the shadows don’t seem to know about WP. You could have tricked them easy 😄
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Passion for what you love doing the most ! No one is ready to quite men!
My writers world is a world of wisdom
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Holding The Space ART ARE WE 💎
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I had such a visceral response when you introduced the gasoline and matches…! Excellent work.
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Thank you!
🔥ლ(=ↀωↀ=)ლ
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Hey 👋
Anyone here
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Beautiful subject does not announced it self, because it special and precious in the sight
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The shadows were about that bullshit. Jealous of the work the poet put into his shit. Telling him to burn it so he can Ascend to somewhere. Fuck that shit. Good stuff.
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(๑*ᗜ*) Thanks!
I guess it’s very good advice to never follow someone whose face you can’t see :))
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This left me beautifully spooked XD if that’s even possible ❤
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Thanks for checking it out! (๑>◡<๑)
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You’re welcome!
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This is magnificent
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Oh, thank you! (。^‿^。)
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You are welcome.
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Wow, this is just another level of brilliant! 👌 Loved that he took refuge in his words at the end. Amazing piece!
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|= ͡° ᆺ ͡°)=
\╭☞ \╭☞ Thank you!
And thanks for checking it out!
Much appreciated 🙂
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Well penned. Happy Blogging.
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(⁎˃ᆺ˂) Thanks!
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I’m shocked that this sounds so real!
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It might really be for some ┐( ̄ヮ ̄)┌
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True and nice post
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Thank you! (^_^)
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True👍
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Absolutely love it, especially the half hidden desire to burn the lot!
Gwen.
(Then one of the shadows -Gave him…’
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Thanks!
I guess the shadows were the ones not ready to receive a writer yet ツ
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Interesting drops
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Nice
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Sounds like “the subject” is a level 3 in Dabrowski TPD and struggling to climb the narrower limbs at the top of the tree, waking in morning to find himself having slipped and fallen a rung or two. Regardless, powerful imagery Bogdan, as usual.
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Oh, many thanks for checking it out, Tory!
⊂(◉‿◉)つ
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What if the shadows were only trying to get you to let go of the old so you you unlock and ascend into a new world of creativity ?
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Yeah,bitter amazing truth
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Loved the way it ended, anyone would want to go back to sleep 😀
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Absolutely 🤣🤣
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Awesome
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Thanks! 😃
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you! ⊂(◉‿◉)つ
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He watched the shadows, the shadows watched him. you are onto something here B. thanks foe sharing this.
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I thank you for checking it out! ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ
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Keep following your heart even when in doubt.
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That’s right! (◕‿◕)
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“My people, we stay indoors. We have keyboards. We have darkness.” —Neil Gaiman
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“My people, we stay indoors. We have keyboards. We have darkness.”
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\╭☞ \╭☞ That’s right!
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I like this very much.
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٩( ^ᴗ^ )۶ oh, thank you!
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Amazing! Thank you🙂
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I thank you! (^_^)
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This remains one of the most beautiful poem I ever read. Picturesque, vivid and idyllic in a poignant way.
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Aw, thank you very much, Olutomi!
(´◑ω◐ ` )
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Beautifully engaging
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(=゚ ω゚)ノ Thanks!
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I really like what you have done with this one. Once a writer it is hard to let go of our body of work!
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Thanks! 🙂
It is indeed known that writers are stubborn creatures
(`•ω•´๑)
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Yes we are!!
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