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Chewers & Masticadores // Editora: Nolcha Fox

They will never finish the building
It would stay in its skeletal form
forever
because the government is
corrupt
but then
they all are
so it wasn’t the grandest
tragedy of the world
It was a fun place for
the kids
A place where they pretended to be
monkeys and did parkour
and whatnot
A place where tight friendships
and love were to
be discovered
and kept hidden in the various
incomplete rooms
and under unfinished stairs
The unfinished building was the
wonderland of a truly magical childhood
And it was still unfinished by
the time childhood ended
It’s been twenty years
and her girlfriends kept asking
her why she wasn’t
dating or starting a family
She just shrugged. Said she didn’t
want to hurt any men
It was enough those twenty years
ago when she
told a boy that he had to
walk across the high…
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Nice
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Oh, thanks! ´・ᴗ・ `
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I love the story you reveal in this poem and how you end it as it started – perfect! 🙂
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The girl’s struggle with the past is as unfinished as the building
(´,,•ω•,,)
Many thanks for checking it out! 🙂
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I hope that she one day forgives herself for the fall.
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Me too ʘ‿ʘ
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An amazing description of an unfinished building, the cause thereof and all that goes on inside it! A real good one! Congrats!
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Oh, thank you! (′ꈍωꈍ‵)
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