the old boy wakes up three hours ahead of the world that lives in concrete buildings and one hour ahead of the competition and emerges from his damp tent looks around the park looks at the sky Overcast He stretches a bit and scratches his head and walks over to the fountain and has a drink collects some mint leaves chews on them spits and rinses his mouth The work clothes are already on him Boots two pairs of socks cotton and wool faded jeans a shirt a sweater and coat over them mittens and a cap that covers his ears as well It's now time to set about collecting tin cans around the neighborhood to make just enough for a meal and a half and maybe a few cigarettes sold individually It's been enough years for all this to become routine When you don't know of any better you don't expect any better And now he only did this to have just enough energy and life force to visit the public library and read heart warming poems
this is not one of them

This is a wonderful poem — the ‘old boy’ has purified life to the essential being, and going to the library to read poetry is a fine reward for the work of collecting cans.
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༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ Yeah, food and clothing are for the body, but poetry is for the soul…
Many thanks for checking it out, Mich! 🙂
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Damn right about poetry, I’m happy to read you.
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Thanks! (❍ᴥ❍ʋ)
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sadly and lovely
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( .づ◡﹏◡)づ. Thank you!
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Very touching. An invisible life.
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yeah, there are lots of invisible lives in this world…
(๑´ﻌ`๑)
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I really enjoyed reading this poem!
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Aw, thank you!
*:・゚✧(=✪ ᆺ ✪=)*:・゚✧
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This poem has made the man’s experience real. Anyone could step into his shoes. Great.
Gwen.
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(๑*ᗜ*) Thank you, Gwen!
I’m glad I can give the reader the opportunity to step into a character’s shoes.
(just make sure you don’t stay there. It doesn’t seem too pleasant :))
(╭ರ_ ⊙ )
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Poignant and sweet. It also is laced in nostalgia with the warm library scene. Excellent! 💫
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(ㅅ´ ˘ `) Oh, thank you!
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Good
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“visit the public library and
read heart warming poems”
The best thing to do!!!!!
♪ \(^ω^\ )
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That’s what I’d do (◕‿◕)
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True indeed… Mr. Dragos, if you weren’t able to be a writer, what would be that one thing you would like to do in life?
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( ° ͜ʖ͡°) Ooh, this is a most difficult question, since I never considered anything else.
I remember always dreading that very popular question that adults ask children: “What would you like to be when you grow up?”
I didn’t want to grow up, first of all :))
But, well, it’s not something one can control…
Now I’m in my 20s and people no longer ask “What would you like to be when you grow up?” but something along the lines of “What would you have liked to be if you weren’t a dispatcher?”
The answer is the same as ever. “I don’t know.”
I guess if I wasn’t writing, I’d just be working at my regular job and be an average person like anyone else… (◕‸◕ )
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I see
Well that’s one thing.
Am 12 at the moment, and I was and also am in this ” Peter Pan ” stage.
I don’t want to grow, but at the same time i have the excitement of seeing where life will take when I grow up.
…but I have to say, Your dedication and love for writing has inspired me the most…
And have a nice day ahead!.
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Wow, that is the nicest thing to hear!
Thank you! ╰ (*´︶`* )╯
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Your most welcome 👍🏻
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Great poem, touching. ❤
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ʕっ• ᴥ • ʔっ Thank you!
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Beautifully told poetic tale, about one of life’s variations and what makes it worth living. There is hope at the end of this rainbow…. in the form of the poetry section of the public library…So original!
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(づ ◕‿◕ )づ Many thanks for checking it out, Karima!
Much appreciated 🙂
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So enjoyed this poem. He certainly knew what had value and he’d earned the right to enjoy it. Cheers, Muriel
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Thank you, Muriel! (◍•ᴗ•◍)
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Powerful. That last line . . .
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(• ◡ •)/ Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Writing Me Up and commented:
Love this, Bogdan. With not too much imagining and a few different roads not taken, this old boy could have been me. Let’s hope the poems give him the strength to keep going.
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(っ╹◡╹)っ Thank you!
I hope anyone who’s going through a rough patch can find the strength to carry on in poetry.
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