dead and unfazed
217 days
without speaking
or seeing each other
and suddenly she shows up
knocks on his door and says,
“Hey, we’re still together, right?
Still a couple?”
He didn’t answer,
just ushered her in
through a curtain of smoke
and moldy smells.
His small apartment
looked more like a cave
than ever before.
The walls were dark and irregular
with buildup of grime.
The cockroaches were long dead,
poisoned with cigarette smoke
and ashes
26 years her senior,
he was a modern caveman
Still lived in a cold, dark,
and gross cave,
but he had a laptop
and internet connection.
The screen
was the only thing
alive in the cave.
It showed a compilation
of short videos
featuring brutal executions
from all around the world.
“So how have you been?”
she asked.
His reply was a grunt
as his gnarled hand
reached into his breast pocket
and…
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i once met a man that was alive.
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Damn, what was his secret? (⊙ꇴ⊙)
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hahah!
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Very very good, the uncaring grunts say it all….
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Yeah, the world is full of people who only exist but don’t really live…
(X_X) ☜ (◉▂◉ )
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It feels like they are already on the shallow layers of hell….so to speak
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Yep, you said it ( ɵ̥̥ ﹏ ɵ̥̥)
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Very good
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Thank you! (* ̄∇ ̄*)
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Such a scenic and engaging piece. Can’t help but think if we’re living or we’re alive.
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(つ▀_▀)つ Thanks, Carter!
I wonder that as well…
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The cockroaches were long dead,
poisoned with cigarette smoke
and ashes…..he was a chain smoker or depressed person
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Yep, both (^_^)
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Oh, your story has the culture of today. Young people do not live a healthy lifestyle but live in style and die in style☺️.
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Many thanks for checking it out 😁
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You are welcome 😀
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You put a lot across with only grunts, cigarette smoke, and gory videos. That’s great writing! Loved it. 🙂
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(ノ´ー`)ノ Thank you!
I like to believe no grunt has ever been uttered without heavy words pressing it from behind :))
same with cigarette smoke and gory videos (or the penchant to watch them).
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Beautifully done
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Thanks! Much appreciated (・◡・)
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