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Chewers & Masticadores // Editora: Nolcha Fox

he felt a bit guilty
about it
but just
a bit
He knew
it was wrong to
be happy
when father came home
drunk
and stupid
but it was the only time
when mother
came to sleep
in his room,
“because your father
needs to cool
off,” as she put it
It was a good deal
because she
slept in his bed
and let him
suck on
her breasts
and told him
stories
“When I was your age,”
tonight’s
story went,
“I slept in a closet when
daddy came
home drunk. And my only
friend there
was a hanged tie
that looked like
a snake. I would stand on
my toes
and whisper in its ear, tell
it about my day,
about how my life
sucked
and how daddy beat me
and mommy
didn’t want me around either.
The snake tie listened.
It listened to
anything, everything…
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Very upsetting, I like the darkness in your poetry.
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-=≡Σ(((⊃゚∀゚)つ Thank you very much!
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Super poem, with a dark shadow.. great work!
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Thank you for reading it!
(´・ᴗ・`)
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How an “absent” father led this girl to yearn for the love and attention all in the wrong ways/places. Dark but surely an honest one.
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Thank you very much, Neelam!
I always aimed for exactly that (´,,•ω•,,)
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You’re welcome 😉
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disturbing imagery and symbolism. dreadful metamorphoses of darkness and abuse.
keep writing cathartic poetry, bogdan.
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Aw, thank you so much!
Will do my best! It’s a promise (◕‿◕)
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I tried not to like this . . . but I cannot lie.
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Haha, thanks, Andrew! (●‿●)
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Dark…disturbing…delicious…🖤
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Thank you!
I like my fiction exactly like that
(๑‵●‿●‵๑)
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Me too…99% of my fiction and poetry, AND what I enjoy reading, is as dark as the pits of hell. 😊🖤
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Absolutely achieved the desired effect. I love this.
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٩( ^ᴗ^ )۶ Glad to hear it. Thanks!
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