her words awakened
physical pain
in him
the mere sound of them
was like
claws scratching against
his brain
When she's old enough,
a mother can
hurt her son
like she never could in
her youth
Listening to her
now,
he felt like crying
And she wasn't even
cursing him
She just looked around
and then finally set
her eyes on him
and repeated the
same question
"When is he
coming home?"
"But mother, I am home,"
he cried. "It's me!"
But in reply
she would only make a
confused face
and start looking around
again
and ask the same
question again
She was
only 62
and aside from her
mind
everything was healthy
about her
which only meant that
they'll both be
stuck in
this hell
for longer
Years that will
feel like decades
At the begining, The feeling at the begining differs at the End…. Realization dawn on me that what I think is not what it is…. Connectivity of creativity well expressed…
Wow. An intense situation so well penned. Great
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you! ⊂( ・ヮ・⊂)
LikeLiked by 2 people
An interesting pic……
LikeLiked by 3 people
Yep, I love it
(´∩。• ᵕ •。∩`) ♡
LikeLiked by 2 people
A very different concept. I love it too…..
LikeLiked by 2 people
Felt like I was reading a novel….
It really captures ones attention
LikeLiked by 3 people
(ゝ◡・)ノ Many thanks for the read!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I know people who have had that terribly sad experience and you capture it well.
Gwen.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you, Gwen!
Very glad to know I could achieve that in writing
(๑′ ᴗ ‵๑)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your works shake my soul
LikeLiked by 4 people
Aw, thank you for checking them out!
It’s very much appreciated ♥( ˆ⌣ ˆԅ)
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s sad 😦
LikeLiked by 4 people
I can’t help loving sad stories…
(◕‸◕ )
LikeLiked by 2 people
What a sad poem, but captures dementia so well!
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thank you! (˶′◡‵˶)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sad poem, but it’s one of the best I read describing dementia. It’s a hell to go through indeed, my grandmother had it.
LikeLiked by 4 people
(.づ◡﹏◡)づ. Indeed, it can be quite the hell to go through.
I had an aunt who suffered from it.
LikeLike
I think she has Alzheimer’s! It happens often ! Beautiful lines like a story 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks!
Yeah, I think you’re right ヾ( ‘ – ‘*)
LikeLike
🙂🙂🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
The sentiment is expressed so well!
LikeLiked by 4 people
(ノ´ー`)ノ Thank you!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Nice poem.. sentiments, Love your works ❣️
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you! \(•ᴗ•)/
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow, very moving. Thanks for posting 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
(o◕ᴗ◕) Thanks for reading it, Tom!
LikeLike
At the begining, The feeling at the begining differs at the End…. Realization dawn on me that what I think is not what it is…. Connectivity of creativity well expressed…
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you for reading it! (´。• ◡ •。`)
LikeLike
Painfully sad.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Marvelous writing!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much for checking it out, Poetry Goddess! Much appreciated!
´・ᴗ・ `
LikeLike
Youre welcome! 🌺
LikeLiked by 1 person
I felt all the words as I read them, bittersweet 🖤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Amy!
⊂( ・﹏・⊂)
LikeLiked by 1 person